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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
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0 posted 2002-03-02 05:55 AM


-TWO-


it's amazing how two weeks can hurt
so amazing I sit here trying
and crying
so damn worked up
so far from the binds
indeed in the window
can any be but your last
can I just kiss your
again another two weeks
just for oneword
maybe it's because
we haven't heard
so fight as we may
chance those weeks again today
talk the walk and change the meaning
destroy eachother within it all
maybe we're just 2 weaks

J.L. Koehler



[This message has been edited by carolinadreams (03-02-2002 06:00 AM).]

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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

1 posted 2002-03-02 07:06 AM


Nice poem.  Did you mean to say "Two weaks" at the end?  It was an interesting wordplay.
carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142

2 posted 2002-03-02 07:39 AM


I meant to have you think if that helps any. Thank you for pondering.
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