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LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

0 posted 2002-02-25 07:02 AM

Mommy Please don't cry,
Don't give up,
Give it another try.

Mommy If you'll help me,
Then I'll help you,
We'll tough it out,
We'll make it through.

Mommy, it will be alright,
No more screaming,
No more fights.

Mommy, I love you so,
More than you will ever possibly know.

Mommmy, don't be sad,
Look on the goodside,
Get glad! (with gladwear)

Mommy I promise it will be alright,
I will bring you sunshine,
And make your days bright.

Mommy, there is nothing more I can do,
Except help you, and love you.

Mommy, Be there for me, and I'll be there for you,
We'll be happy in everything we do.

Mommy, It's ok,
Tomorrow will be a better day.

I love you... don't give up.

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

1 posted 2002-02-27 06:29 PM

Wonderful poem. I wish I had that kind of relationship with my mother. Keep it up, you write wonderfully.

---Night Angel

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

2 posted 2002-02-28 12:58 PM

My Mom was never a "touchy,kissy" person.Her love radiated from her and I would bask in it's warmth.

paladin

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-03-01 12:08 PM

That is a great poem and if it is a personal account I hope your Mom saw it, as a Mother I would appreciate receiving a poem like this one. Great job.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2002-03-01 12:34 PM

I love this, it reminds me of the relationship my mother & I had when I was a little girl!

ELMO

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

5 posted 2002-03-02 04:57 AM

Good poem. The repetition made it rather emotional.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

6 posted 2002-03-03 01:09 AM

This is cute I liked it, it made me wish that i didnt hate my mom and she didnt hate me

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