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dimples
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since 2002-02-15
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0 posted 2002-02-23 11:57 PM


You make me smile
You make me laugh
You make me cherish
Every last breath

Everytime I'm with you
I can never be sad
Or ever be mad
I can't say I love you
Because I could never be certain
I'm trying to trust you
But it is so hard
I'm trying to make this last.

© Copyright 2002 dimples - All Rights Reserved
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2002-02-24 05:43 PM


yep yep, I know these feelings right NOW
hmmmmm
Mags

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
2 posted 2002-02-25 04:16 PM


affection is very confusing sometimes.. it makes our world meaningless at the same time, let's us see life like we've never seen it before.. this beautiful piece reminds me of that.. thanks..
dimples
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since 2002-02-15
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3 posted 2002-02-25 11:44 PM


Thanks for your comments there great.
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