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Excercising My Venom
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Excercising My Venom |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
So I admit jealousy so what? Just because you can have what I want gives you no right to encounter me silently. I hate that I can't warn you because of this human feeling I have towards whatever pain you're feeling. Emotional? physical.. matters not, for I tire of standing in understanding. What dreams I have of not caring what dainty dishes of hopes I have that you will one day be unblinded and release what I now feel belongs to me. And what shame have I, for wanting such and what disgust I have for needing to have shame. You unearth the worst of desires within my heart and I don't think it needs to be said how much I cannot bear the thought of you sometimes. yes, jealousy let us ponder it for a while and how it makes me angry that you have something I want. And if you're reading this thinking its about you then you have issues to ponder things to question but don't dare speak silently of me for I will hear your voice eventually. So designate whatever thoughts you wish for me and I will continue to struggle. but I don't need your concern for it is my battle and if what is yours was meant to be yours you'll be able to hold it without keeping it captive and so far you've only kept it captive with guilty manipulations for I have seen these things used. Don't think I don't recognize you, Lady A part of me was once you. I may be young but I am, by no means, unaware or stupid.. and you aren't either.. are you? "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yikes! Just glad it isn't me......  |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
wow, we can write stuff like this to people on here? The possibilities are endless!!! Everyone has someone they'd like to slam in public!!!!!!! I thought this was just about poetry! Oh I guess we can't mention names right? but we can blast them in metaphor or something, i will learn as i go along..... marya [This message has been edited by marya2 (02-23-2002 12:19 PM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
ouch!!!! : ) very Good |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Not to worry..I'm not blasting anyone here.  Thanks for reading everyone! And this really isn't a metaphor..its simply dealing with jealousy, missing someone, and then conflicting disgust with myself for behaving this way. It is about exactly what it says..nothing more. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marya: no, this site isn't just about poetry. Here, we interact, form close friendships, relationships...we do not however, 'slam' our members. Yes, we can express hurt, pain and anger, but hateful poetry that insults or abuses a person - even if no names are mentioned - is always watched closely. Thanks K |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
But oh how poetic your words are. This is a beautiful piece, and touches the very heart of how you truly feel. To vent such emotions in such a magnanimously eloquent writing is a statement of your expertise. I love to see purest emotions described in detail in prose. Great job, and likewise great job of not "slamming". Indeed sometimes the hurt does enrage the heart to defense. When it is a real emotion, it is sanctioned by the soul, and not just an excuse to attack. Well done! |
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