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Encarta
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since 2002-02-14
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My homeland is not of the world

0 posted 2002-02-18 10:59 AM



In The End
The angles appeared to me
They opened the doors so I may see
That my love has fallen to it's knees
As my soal collapes into the sea

The water overcomes my life
Cutting through my soal like a knife
Leaving behind only the endless strife
That consumed everything throughout my life

Love has vanished in the end
Cupid gave all that he could lend
But so greatly do we spend
That it consumes us in the end

[This message has been edited by Encarta (02-18-2002 11:00 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 James M. Hohne - All Rights Reserved
LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

1 posted 2002-02-19 04:56 PM


Wow, that was a beautiful poem, filled with anger and hurt. Good job.
Write on!
LadyP

Encarta
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world
2 posted 2002-02-19 06:37 PM


thanks
dimples
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since 2002-02-15
Posts 7

3 posted 2002-02-23 11:52 PM


Great poem, love is hard to find and well hard to keep. This was excellent I hope I'll see more
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