»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #3
»
Devoid
| Dark Poetry #3 |
|
Devoid |
|
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
|
I have nothing left to write The last spark of emotion Is frozen into apathy I am empty Devoid of life of love We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles [This message has been edited by EagleOne (02-16-2002 03:36 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2002 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved | |||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Pick up the pen, start over again, and again. Well written, my fine feathered friend. |
||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Midnitesun ~ I hope the ink will flow again, and appologies for the typo!  We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
||
|
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
one must scribble frantically or slowly but let not your pen cease to bleed my friend... when the mighty pen bucks and refuses to breath upon your page you must resuscitate with breath of soul speak kindly scream loudly weep much laugh hysterically but never never quit the fight! a poet you are my friend... a poet you are cursed to be... live your destiny sift your pen... ============================== sorry eddie...impromtu dont always come out shiny...lol but you inspired something in me ..and well..this is what came out..  i hope you find that you can write again..soon.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
||
|
fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Like the way this closes - literally, lol, like a curtain, to conclusion. Good job. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
||
|
Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One, it will surprise you one of these days and your mind won't be able to keep up with your pen......words will flow and you will share again with us. A new face, a song, a look from a loved one or stranger, and your heart will beat in rhyme. Enjoy a short rest and see 'ya back soon, ME |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eddie Your words were so heartfelt and edged in sorrow. I wish you well and I know that the words will flow for you again soon. Take care mate......Sue Suetang |
||
|
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, my friend, you can't be devoid of love when someone loves you Dee |
||
|
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you got that right ms dee.. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
