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qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2002-02-13 11:37 AM


This poem was written by my grandmother after I made her a poem book, compiled of poems I have written & gave to her on X-mas! I just needed to share it, because it means so much to me! ELMO!

"Ode to My Favorite Little Poet"

I need to find a reason,
to creep into her mind.
To delve into her verses,
to see what I could find.

It doesn't take an expert,
for me to plainly see,
that sometimes she is lonely,
& she's much too young to be.

Her poetry is lovely - but,
too many words are sad.
She needs to use some adjectives,
like Happy, Cheerful, Glad.

So now, my little poet,
it's time for me to say,
banish all those saddened words.
Write happy ones today.

And I don't need to tell her,
her hurts will disappear.
To let her know she's loved a lot,
& even more each year!


© Copyright 2002 ¢¾ KT ¢¾ - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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1 posted 2002-02-13 10:21 PM


Awww that is just too sweet.

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

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2 posted 2002-02-14 05:20 PM


If I was one to cry, I would be right now. Very sweet - Justly deserved.

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qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2002-02-14 05:26 PM


Thanx you guys!--I did cry when I read this! lol--It just meant a lot to me! ELMO
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-02-16 01:38 PM


Yes some reveal themselves through their poetry...James
qtpieelmo
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5 posted 2002-02-16 09:59 PM


Very tru James--thanx!! ELMO
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