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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2002-02-09 04:26 PM


Is there one strong enough anywhere,
To remove my fabled Excalibur from the rock in my heart?
To comprehend then worship my ways, my emotion?
Is there one who in turn, can rip my very world apart?

Who could croon to the ministrations of the soul?
Who would wipe the fevered brow of this spirit?
Who can also see the ring around the Moon,
Comprehend and interpret it?

Who bears a passion for life and expression,
Such as I?
Who is man enough to take life by the hand,
Face the world with arms wide open and know when to sigh?

What man could fulfill such strong and perhaps uncomprehensible emotion,
What man would want to?
What male of our species overflows with such gifts?
What man can't sit still cos there is so much yet to do?

Who would or could be with me until the end?
Together we'd forge ahead through our existance,
And who's name would I whisper,
When my time in this realm is through?

*~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~*

© Copyright 2002 Isis - All Rights Reserved
leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
1 posted 2002-02-09 04:44 PM


It can be a life long search. I hope you find what you are looking for. That person you can know will yell your name when you whisper theirs.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2002-02-12 07:55 PM


That is the question..
I don't know maybe my very being overwhelms contenders?
Just musings.....

Isis

*~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~*

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
3 posted 2002-02-18 10:39 PM


your being overwhelms...
your being intimidates...
your being engrosses and enthralls...
your purity always shines.

the musings are good for character...
the wankers are not.

love ya isis! (awesome poem!)

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2002-02-19 04:11 PM


overwhelming???

I don't think so. . . but, it's good to see it all written down. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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