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Jcvballgrl13
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0 posted 2002-02-09 08:58 AM





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~*~This is a poem I wrote about because I miss our friendship~*~

I thought you were a {EDITED BY A MODERATOR)
Until I talked to you
We had such a great connection
I knew our friendship would be true

You spent the summers at my house
We tried to stay up all night
We could talk and talk for hours
We hardly got in fights

We dreamed of the days we'd see eachother
In classes and in school
In public we just went crazy
We didnt care if we looked like fools

You were always there for me
I'll always treasure you
You'll always be in my heart
Until the end is through

I can't tell you so I write
It's you that I miss
I don't know where our friendship went
It's turned to so much bliss

It's so hard to keep going
This slience is killing me
Your so close but yet so far
Is it that hard to see?

I want you back in my life
I miss the good days
I'm so confused about where our friendship is
I feel like I'm in a maze

I take all the wrong turns
I can't find you

I call your name but I get no resonse
I'm so scared
I feel so alone
I feel impaired

Life is so hard
Without you
Everything is so cold
Everything is so blue

So just come back
I need you now
To help me live my life
Cause I have no clue how

~*~I wrote this because I didn't know how to tell you to your face how much I miss you. We never talk anymore. I miss talking to you about your life and I miss getting you advice since you were always right about everything. I know this sounds weird but I really love you Katie. You were my best friend and it hurts that we never talk anymore. I miss you so much and I hope this makes you realize that you mean a lot to me and I just want to be friends again.~*~



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leafseranade
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1 posted 2002-02-10 12:12 PM


aw. I hope she realizes how much you hold this friendship close to your heart. I know how much it hurts to lose close friends. I've been through it more than once and it doesn't get easier. I just hope you two can work things out!
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2 posted 2002-02-10 04:00 AM


You have penned this from an open and honest heart and there is no better truth than that, and I too hope it works out.  Nicely done to honor a friend.

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3 posted 2002-02-10 05:16 PM


A sad letter indeed. Very enjoyable reading.


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qtpieelmo
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4 posted 2002-02-13 11:20 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This really touched my heart 'cuz I know what's it's like to lose a friend--I just started talking to my best friend again after 2 years of silence--It was tough, but I had to forgive her,we've been friends way too long,since Kindergarten(15 years)--I hope your friend finds her way back into your heart, like mine has,before too much time goes by!! ELMO (Katie)

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