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jennirey
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0 posted 2002-01-27 10:34 PM


I secretly long for a blanket of peace.
A yielding ray of sunshine to come over me.
I need to find my place in this life.
One that is not tarnished with my starvation of trust.
I am always anxious, It turns you away.

Please someone loan me their Peace?
Can I use it to keep him?
I just need it for a little while.
Ill give it back when mine has returned
It was that hideous beast that took mine away.

I have lost the hate for him.
Returned I am granted constant turmoil in any affinity
My unsettled mind plays tricks on me.
Please don’t leave this time.
I promise to get better. Just love me right

Because you are a breath of hope.
A promise of the spring on a cold winter day
I want my blanket of peace back.
It was so unjustly taken,
I was so young. Its not fair.

Please, I am so cold (for peace)
I only need wrapped up for a while.
Mine will return soon I promise,
I always promise this to myself.
This time I mean it.

Why Wont I believe It.


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-01-30 03:40 AM


I think if you want it and hope for it and desire it and pray for it you will find your peace...James
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2 posted 2002-01-31 03:41 PM


Oh wow, what a wonderful piece. It almost made me cry. Stellar writting, and great words choice. A beautiful piece my friend. I hope and pray things get better for you. *hugs*

Sincerely,
Titus

"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. And inside of a dog, it's too dark to read."
           -Groucho Marx

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