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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2002-01-27 11:25 AM


From the farthest reaches
Of time and space
Cold is the wind
That blows upon me
Whilst my battered shield
Offers little resistance
To the onslaught of terror
Waged through the night
As lifelessly I lie
In this tattered empty bed
The hunger pangs
Of a love starved soul
Echo mercilessly
Throughout my body
Conveying my mind
To sheer insanity
Lost I am
The dreamer without a cause
Forced to find comfort
Huddled in the darkest corners of existence
Weeping tears
Only I can see

Cold and alone
There I be
With no one to come
And rescue me
From the cruelest of visions
That I see
And the madding fate
That's meant for me

G. A. Webb
01/27/02

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2002 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2002-01-27 10:23 PM


Very well written.  A little sad and cold, but well expressed!

Mags

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
2 posted 2002-01-28 01:13 PM


Thanks Mags, I'm glad you liked it. It's good to hear from you again. Drop me a line and let me know how it's go'n. Take care!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


china doll
Junior Member
since 2002-01-20
Posts 22

3 posted 2002-01-28 02:33 PM


beautiful poem...I like your style and wording, it really expresses the pain that you feel-at times I feel this way too.Thanks for sharing!
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
4 posted 2002-01-29 12:55 PM


You are more than welcome, my dear.  I am glad to see you haven't lost your poetic touch.  Hope all is going well with ya also.  I'll email ya soon though



Mags

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