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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2002-01-26 10:33 PM


Do You

Do you stir at night?
Reaching out, no one there!
Do you lay awake listening to the crickets?
Thinking of what we might have been
Do you hear the laughter and see the smiles?
Through the clouded visions of a drunken stupor
Do you know the regrets that bring the tears?
So much we lost through the years

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

© Copyright 2002 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
Dark Kisses
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1 posted 2002-01-27 11:13 AM


Oh yeah, I know these words very well.  I always wonder what could of been ....
Hmmmmm guess we'll never really know though.
Good write!! (as always)
Mags

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2002-01-27 07:45 PM


Dark Kisses ~ Thanks! Yes I guess we never will know and as such probably shouldn’t ponder those thoughts for too long. Take care!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2002-02-12 08:18 PM


ouch....

yes...
well..i mean..not the 'me and you' of me and you..lol  (lets see how confused i can get this..ha!) but....

yes...ouch..
i'll shut up now..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"it may be absurd..but dont be naive..even heros have the right to bleed" john ondrosic?

militantpoet
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4 posted 2002-02-13 04:16 AM


A touching piece, I like it. I think every person who has ever doubted themselves can relate
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2002-02-13 05:23 AM


g ~ thanks,  I think!     take care!

militantpoet  ~ I think the doubts are always there

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Dee
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6 posted 2002-02-13 06:57 AM


The doubts and questions always come after the loss. More to the point...do they feel the pain more than you?

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2002-02-14 06:11 AM


More of less? I don't really know, but I do know we all feel the pain.

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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