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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2002-01-23 11:14 PM


Should I turn to the left?
Or is it the right?
Go straight or forward?
To hold you tonight

Follow the river South?
Go to the ocean, West?
Stumble North to the Pole?
It's your love I am obsessed

The light shows yellow
Or is it red?
I would rather it be green
But you have not yet said

Directions, directions
Which way should I go?
To open up
And let my feelings flow

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

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1 posted 2002-01-24 02:27 AM


awesome poem .Short but tasty.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2002-01-24 05:23 AM


Decisions, decisions! Well done.
qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2002-01-28 12:53 PM


Yea this one really captured my attention--I liked the last stanza best, because its sumpthin I have trouble with a lot! ELMO
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