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The Pristine Eye
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The Pristine Eye |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Never from its sights will falter The heartbreak it evokes in those caught by its Beautiful glistenings are but aggravating specks of Dust easily washed away with such small a tear That even in its second of watering, wavers not from The glory unto itself of its goal in view. The flushings and makeovers of others entertain Yet cannot unfocus this visionball from achieving ... Its iris may be superficial, yet eye-catching, and a Great manipulation for subservience... and still within A blink, bolstering self egotism is centered into field Once again, making the superficiality a fun minds eye Game to reach its great see of reward. The pristine eye can witness the building of its own Pedestal with a corneal grin ever so valiantly Eyewitnessing the material success its outer temporary Grandeur affords. It never could see itself, though. The "me" cataracts prevented seeing the pure white gone... Bloodshot by immaturity with the dust specks still embedded forever. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You know the faults you speak of Purity, so fix them!! Great write ! Btw when you read my posts it's customary to sign your name!! LOL I want your impressions of the Pagan and the Berserker please! Isis *~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~* |
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