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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-21 01:23 AM

I know I haven’t been around-
And it seems like I am nowhere to be found,
You ask yourself where did you go wrong?
Which read between the rhymes you missed in our love song?
But you know how it all became this way,
My good looks and my personality had you sway,
Not a moment too soon, you decide to be my boo,
No misconceptions or such sort was left as a clue,
Together forever was not the thought we conceived,
However, to be with one another we perceived,
To you I became more than just cute “cheeks”
And you became for a while my only sweet kiss,
Left to imagination the future between us,
Till this day on you can’t recall what led us to fuss,
We knew this moment was to arrive,
When I leave you and go on a drive,
While you wait and wonder where have I gone?
Just remember to take it all in and be strong…

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2002-01-21 09:34 AM

Very tough situation. I'm sorry you're going through this... but yes, strength is key. *hugs*
I enjoyed this.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2002-01-21 04:24 PM

thanks for the response. Again this is another example of my imagination on the run.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

3 posted 2002-01-21 07:35 PM

This poem my be very true to your emotions, but it almost seems like you want this guy to suffer over you. Isn't that kind of sadistic? Not all realtionships are meant to last forever, some you just have to let go.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2002-01-22 12:43 PM

secret whisper, i am a guy and i am neither bi or gay. so you get the point. And by the way this is a fictional poem.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2002-01-22 07:06 PM

another great poem i liked the story you used to create the feelings its kind of what i've been doing but ain't all life a story.

hope to see more real soon

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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