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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-19 03:18 AM

The sadness that creeps,
parts the heart within,

ignorant of the fact-
this miserable continues his act,

siding with pain filled pleasure,
somehow this is all he seems to treasure.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-01-19 04:58 PM

Oh, my friend, I enjoyed this piece. A truely good write. While short, it seemed to work for this piece. I can understand you somewhat here. I question myself all the time. Again, a good write.

Sincerely,
Titus

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2002-01-19 04:59 PM

Sorry, forgot to add it too my library.

Titus

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2002-01-19 04:59 PM

Ack! Again!

So sorry!

Titus

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2002-01-20 01:43 AM

Thank you for your comments titus. I will write some real dark and mind blowing poems. Just give me some time. Check out my old stuff if you have time. It in the other dark passions forums.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

5 posted 2002-01-21 12:55 PM

This two was another wonderful write, I enjoyed it so very much!

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"-NIN
"There is no always forever"-The Cure
"Even the losers get lucky some times"-Tom Petty

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

6 posted 2002-01-21 01:38 AM

I thank you Ginners for your response to both of my poems.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

7 posted 2002-01-21 07:45 PM

I have to agree, this poem was short but very well written. Excellent write, once again.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

8 posted 2002-01-22 06:59 PM

a truely great poem my old friend. i know you were waiting for me to reply. well this is short like mine and does express alot of feeling though dark. you become better all the time and i'm sorry i have not been able to give u those tips. i've been working my u know off with my fantasy novels over the past 8months.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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