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carolinadreams
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0 posted 2002-01-19 01:11 AM



a night without chris
how can it be
he has given me bliss
now so far from me
you might say it's just one night
and i might agree
but i'm in the light
and need chris to see
i know i've done wrong
and know that it must be
but just one night is too long
and not enough is here for me
i am not gay or his lover
we can love to be friends
for tonight i need no other
for wounds only he can mend
he is sweet, he is strong
chris is the best
he is neat, he is where love belongs
chris is blessed
he is what i wish to be
he is there
he is so unsure of where to care
he is purity

Dedicated to C.P. - Thanks for my life

J.L. Koehler

© Copyright 2002 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-19 03:13 AM


no pun intended. This is a good poem, but I believe it should not belong in the dark forum

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

carolinadreams
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2 posted 2002-01-19 03:22 AM


the reason i posted this in this forum is so it may be read, and maybe help.
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3 posted 2002-01-19 03:33 AM


and now I add
for the  self imerged
it's a shame you haven't met
chris

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4 posted 2002-01-19 05:09 PM


A nicely done piece here. Wondefully written, and very smooth. Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely,
Titus

Smile, Jesus loves you. :)

Ginners
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5 posted 2002-01-19 06:53 PM


very sweet, I am sure Chris would approve.  

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"-NIN
"There is no always forever"-The Cure
"Even the losers get lucky some times"-Tom Petty

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6 posted 2002-01-21 08:07 PM


What a wonderful tribute to Chris.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)


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