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I need a pen |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
-I need a pen- so here i am struggling to write again i need some paper and i missed again so here i am fumbling around again i found some papers can it be again so here i dream again i went within i've read the papers never again so here it is maybe one last time one final staple and i resign so here we are one dream and then i've lost some paper but have my pen J.L. Koehler |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Things never seem to work out the way anyone wants em to..u get one thing and u lose another..ironic...hope you get all you need at the same time eventually! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
How true! How true!  What an origonal piece my friend.  I enjoyed it. I hope we all find our pen!Sincerely, Titus Smile, Jesus loves you. [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (01-19-2002 05:05 PM).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
niece piece. Comical at the best. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
and yet o poetic friend o' mine, would both pen and paper be of any use when the dog eats your glasses? lol Very good writing... |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
it is both comical and frustrating at the same time it seems. i think you did a wonderful job with this one. Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Perhaps a matter of interpretation but I found it intense rather than comical. Either way, well done! |
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