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mauddib
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

0 posted 2002-01-13 10:24 PM

As close as your are,
Is as close as you get!

I'll not let you,
Stampede through my emotions like some pretentious tourist,
Taking snap shots of sleazy men.
Clad in raincoats and balaclavas.
Whom are left to loiter and lurk among the dark recesses of opportunity.

They are absolved from any Catholic criticism.
And given license by anonimity.
Thus,
Immune to scrutiny,
Know no extreme,
In taking overdue priveledge
from a perfect feeding frenzy.
That takes the flesh along for the ride,
While I hide,
Behind a limp
or a nervous smile.

Too easy all this candy taking,
For a hungry man,
Trapped in the store after closing time.

© Copyright 2002 greg connors - All Rights Reserved

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-01-13 10:26 PM

Welcome!!

I enjoyed ur first post and you have a lot of feeling and emotion you put into your poem and it shows which is awesome!! Keep writing!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2002-01-13 10:33 PM

Welcome to DP, my friend.
You write well with much emotions.
Keep up the excellent work

Mags

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-01-14 09:08 AM

Welcome to Passions!

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2002-01-17 12:59 PM

Welcome to Passions!!--I do hope you stay--I've enjoyed this very much!

ELMO

mauddib
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

5 posted 2002-01-17 08:20 PM

Thank you Elmo
for taking the time to read and comment
I appreciate that.

Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

6 posted 2002-01-21 07:11 PM

wonderful piece. it seems that the world may just be teaming with those lurking in the shadows. thank you for sharing.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

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