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Purity
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0 posted 2002-01-09 10:22 PM



Why try to hide it? The essence of purity is honesty, &
there's no reason to fear being pure. I can honestly say that I
have never felt like this... I have never loved like this... I
have never desired like this. Give me the laughter of love.
Console my worries of losing that which matters to me most.
Can you feel it too? What, then, of in giving it a chance, the
possibility of losing the present? Well, if you never try, you
should die. It is not uncommon knowledge that what I seek in
this is shunned by the majority as wrong, asinine, and not able
to have longevity. What do you say? I do not cast aside
genuine souls as being strictly a for the moment relationship.
I do, however, find that most of these souls lack in their being
a way to understand who I am, and what life is about. The
genuine soul is found in the compassion of the best friend
who knows he's not in the realm of the majority, and indeed,
who understands. This genuine soul is what I want as the
longevity that shuns the majority's asinine disbelief...A soul
mate for sharing the purity of love, the laughter of love, the
love of life, and of one another. Will you be the one?


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-01-10 12:26 PM


The hard part is finding someone to fit all of our desires...James
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2 posted 2002-01-10 01:24 AM


I enjoyed this a lot...you put a lot of feeling into it. Well done and keep sharing

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-01-10 01:42 PM


Purity,

It is funny I came upon this poem right at this moment cause I am talking to the one whom I am constantly asking these very questions of. Very good emotions you have penned here. Thanks for sharing, but wish you had also shared the answers. LOL

                               Dawn

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