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Lovely Lady
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Lovely Lady |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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LOVELY LADY A lovely lady I was when sun burnt days kissed happiness A flower, petals fresh and new greeted morn with hopefulness. Too soon cold frost left icicles and joined the end to middle age a frozen mass untouchable adrift in sea of silent pain. Again to melt into the past a dream could be, I think it strange this passion red of vibrant hue my rusted heart did re-arrange. To grow in heat of life anew my needs in you, how can it be this child made woman knowing you found spirit love inside to feel? A life of searching came full stop titanic hands brushed me awake yet still my heart floats aimlessly a boiling pot this deep heartache. Alive on tides of needing you I find you still beyond my view! |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was an amazing piece!! Life brings you up and down and you expressed that point very well in this poem. I enjoyed it...keep em comin! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Beautiful piece here!  Mags Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you both very much for reading and commenting. |
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