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Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2002-01-05 12:10 PM

Be Patient,
For if it's to be it shall.
The words still clamouring the
Dings of both regret and hope.
So long now,
Patience and waiting and praying
And belief and will have been the
Affections and intimacies for me...
Not you.
Yet, when second best shines with
The positions deemed solely mine,
Choices abound, and ultimatums beg.
But then, there you are,
Not out of sight or mind or heart,
Saying no one takes the time
To come to know, anymore, those whom
Their hearts wish with to intertwine.
Giving more of yourself and time
And everything since decisions came
To attempt to let you go, now you
Opt to make appearances,
As if you think possibility.
Lest I seem insecure,
I formulate my stance..."Heads I win;
Tales someone loses."
Will you be there? Is he who so wants
Now to place me as you, he as me,
Actually in first place due solely
To my own error in judgement?
Such a technicality,
Yet dare I to err again?
For you?
For him?
For myself?
Which err do I dare would be best?

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

1 posted 2002-01-06 04:46 PM

wow......powerful stuff.....liked this poem alot

joe

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-06 08:09 PM

Hmm... which one would be best i wonder...nice poem...enjoyed it lots!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

3 posted 2002-01-14 09:50 PM

You have the right to make mistakes with out explaining your actions.You have the right to also enjoy it when you succeed.

paladin

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2002-01-14 10:41 PM

this is an awesome right, sometimes are minds play tricks on are true feelings which one or thing can make us take a look into ones true self. Very deep and meaningful poem good job.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-01-19 05:07 PM

Oh, wow. What a piece my friend! Deep, deep, deep. And troubling. What questions, what probing. A fantastic piece here. Wow.

*walks away mumbling to himself*

Sincerely,
Titus

Smile, Jesus loves you. :)

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

6 posted 2002-01-21 12:52 PM

Wow, this was very good, I really liked and enjoyed it, a lot.

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"-NIN
"There is no always forever"-The Cure
"Even the losers get lucky some times"-Tom Petty

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

7 posted 2002-01-21 07:49 PM

Loved this piece! Wonderful writing style. Though I normally loath reading 'relationship' pieces, you pulled this one off flawlessly.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

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