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RadikalGenetics
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0 posted 2002-01-05 12:08 PM


"Dark December"  

All alone in this Concrete jungle,
where darkness comes early,
where the pavement is cold and
hard smashing teeth.

stone buildings standing without emotion,
people zig zagging back and forth,
emptiness fills their eyes,
I feel blind folded,
I find safety in ignorance.

In the grey darkness, I hunger
for that place, that place where
you are, where the candle light
flickers, where the quilts are thick
and warm. Where there are no clothes,
Where anything Goes.

You are my escape from this hard square world,
I love your curves, they make me human again,
let me burry myself in you, where limp and weak
trees grow and become strong and alive again.

Be my organic garden, nurish me with your love
and tender touches. Give me the warmth and safety
of your bossom. Hold me like a loving child and
I will do the same. Let go with me and let us
fall asleep in each others arms.

A place where there is no cold,
A place where the candle light flickering
allows no darkness, because even when I
close my eyes I see the Light being with you.

Copyright Mark Hilton

© Copyright 2002 RadikalGenetics - All Rights Reserved
amberdragoness
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1 posted 2002-01-08 03:28 AM


I realy like this...such strong passion.I hope you have or will soon find what you seek.
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2 posted 2002-01-09 01:52 PM


I think that you wrote your feelings beautifully here...great poem!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-02-06 02:05 PM


I'm surprised that this work didn't get more comments. Awesome writing!

~Tier

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