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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2002-01-04 09:06 PM


darkness falls where light once shined
engulfing the once joyous man
saddened by the loss of happiness
because of his crimes against his heart
acting without thought or reason
knowing full well what the outcome would be
but yet steadfast, hoping against hope
but friendship once forged on trust
slowly dissipates, breaking their trust
now only heartache and sadness remain
but it is not surprising to see such carnage
to see his heart lying before him
shattered and torn, pieces scattered with the wind
he can only blame himself for his actions
his pain is his own, and will always be
his life returning to haunt him once more
now and forever, scorned as a lonely shadow
to live his life in loneliness and shame
with no love or friend beside him, for all time

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

© Copyright 2002 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
1 posted 2002-01-05 12:00 PM


L.S. it is sad when friendship ends just don't write the world off. This is beautifully written.

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2002-01-10 10:48 PM


I agree with Alan, don't give up altogether on friendship.  So many of us do the wrong thing.  But we live by our mistakes.  Not every one is alike.  Look around youself, there might be many people that care.  They are just hidden in the *Shadows*

Mags

P.S.  Very good write here

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

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