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Dark Poetry #3

Begins & Ends A Part of You

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2001-12-30 07:54 PM

Most believe you will not come to this point,
Always demeaning your worth and feelings as not even there,
Reveling in the fact that my so-strong love is seemingly unreturned,
Knowing not that my patience and will-to-existence are hand in hands.

Will you come to express the "I'm finally there" doubted by most,
Ill fated, and designated self centered greed,
Looked upon as a laugh box stuck in the on position,
Lancing through this heart that loves you so?
I'd surely die hoping so, for in you not only I love, but believe,
And from that belief in you stems such faith in us,
Making the even remote possibility of gaining your heart
Such that the awe of the starriest night fails to just the chance.

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

1 posted 2001-12-30 09:05 PM

I love the way this is written. The hidden meaning is great.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2001-12-30 11:02 PM

This is a great poem with a great message. Thanks for sharing.

Dawn

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