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carolinadreams
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0 posted 2001-12-30 03:21 AM


- Sometimes I wonder -

i sit so many times and wonder
i ask so many times and see
i try so many times and fail
i wonder is it just me

i give so much it feels taken
i take so much it feels free
i wonder about the rest
i wonder is it just me

i spend so much i feel worthless
i waste enough to be free
i accept enough to smile
i wonder is it just me

i write enough for most
i read enough for the rest
i jump at the first word
i wonder is it just me

i run out of patience often
i often wait too long
i wait for you to awaken
i wonder is it just me

i sleep most of the day
i dream most of the night
i think too much always
i wonder is it just me

J.L. Koehler


Peace, Love, and Happiness NOW




[This message has been edited by carolinadreams (12-30-2001 10:21 PM).]

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DawnG
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1 posted 2001-12-30 10:45 PM


Very good poem you have penned here. You have asked a lot of tough questions.

                        Dawn

carolinadreams
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2 posted 2001-12-31 09:40 PM


Thank you, unfortunately I ask those same questions on a daily basis. Be well!!
LadyPeach1
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3 posted 2002-01-01 10:02 PM


God answers prayers and questions.  Your questions won't go unanswered! Good poem! Be happy, hugs~4~you!
Jamie
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4 posted 2002-01-02 12:17 PM


on the brignt side-- only a questioning mind ever receives answers.. take care

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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5 posted 2002-01-03 10:35 AM


Wow,this is great!--I think this is all of us at some point, not just you--I could relate to every line & until I came here I thought it was only me too! ELMO
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