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More Than Just |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
so here I am writing mom would be proud i asked and begged just one children's book maybe some help love carries a stigma just ask my lovely last I gave a heart that many need now I bleed just how does that hurt can I just return and what again are the perks forgive you if I seem involved but again too many are starved right here, and once again how many poor children saw and askedwhy how many explained and how many lost the draw I still say the moon rules mmore than the tide people need to take there's something deep inside while the chance is in its stake I was hopefully bread I was strangely raised now I only hope to be read in our strangely raised days maybe just to get a look and finally write that book J.L. Koehler Peace, Love, and Happiness NOW [This message has been edited by carolinadreams (12-29-2001 11:39 PM).] |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear Carolinadreams This is superb! A fantastic piece of writing full of heart and feeling. I loved it! Keep up the good work. Love Sylvia |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I hope you get to write that book. Dawn |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
nice storyline---well done There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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