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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
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Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2001-12-14 06:20 PM


I feel that I might break
There are so many things weighting me down
It's hard to keep control
My life has gone astray
I don't know where I'm going
I don't know what to do
I'm looking for a path to follow
But there isn't one around
I'm so confused and hurt right now
Why is life so tough?

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since 2001-03-14
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1 posted 2001-12-27 01:01 PM


That last question is something that I'm sure everyone wrestles with at some point or another.  If you ever find the answer, be sure to email me.  
Thanks for sharing a wonderful write.

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-01-01 12:09 PM


Oh yes these thoughts visit us all at some time...James
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2002-01-01 07:27 AM


If we can get through life without breaking up into pieces - well, we surely are fantastic beings.  You are great (we all are) so hang onto that thought and .... go for it!!
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