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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Open arms grasping hands nothing there Eyes looking heart searching wondering where Heart beat echoing a lonely mind full of dead sounds Looking for life but only ghostly spirits Of another time in my world Daylight vanishes leaving cold darkness as night falls Empty dreams loveless lives call Come be in my dreams But stay out of my nightmare You don’t want to be in my nightmares Cold of lonely seeps in bringing in the dread Stealing my breath waking up dreams a long time dead Giving into pressures that undermine my sanity The end is in plain view if I don’t stop I’ll run right into infinity Lost still one more dream ~ my worlds coming apart at the seams You can come into my world but don’t give me any dreams It will just turn into a nightmare My reality no longer matters ~ my life is of no consequence Giving up on dreams and schemes giving up on life Giving into the manifest of evil allowing it to strive It is the only thing that makes me feel alive Watching friends walk away No hearing from them as days pass away Not really caring as I turn to accept the inevitable Allowing the cold dark of night ~ take over my life You hear no cries ~ only the hopelessness of silence I will do you a favor of walking away Not to turn your life dark with the shadow of me I shall walk away into the world beyond the grasp of memory In to the world of the forgotten So stay out of my dreams ~ or become just one more nightmare alan |
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Alysia182 Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 19CT |
I liked this one ALOT! very dark...*giggles* keep up the writing! Alysia Some day, you will ache like I ache! ~Hole [This message has been edited by Alysia182 (edited 12-14-2001).] |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
I know for sure that this friend wouldn't just walk by. Wishing you nothing but sweet dreams my friend, you deserve them. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
There is much power in these stated words but I pray you open your heart to allow the love of friendship to come in. Love opens hearts ... doubt destroys lives. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow this is great!! Liked it a lot!!  ELMO |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I too hope you have nothing but sweet dreams. Dawn |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I also wish you sweet dreams  ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Alan, nightmares are not for you. Wish I could send you sweet dreams all the time. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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amberdragoness New Member
since 2001-12-22
Posts 9 |
Powerful work.Without nightmares would we know the sweet dreams?This touched me and made my heart ache. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
"To sleep,perhaps to dream.but what will come in the dreams.That is the rub" Hamlet paladin |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
good writing, reminds me of Stephen king. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I thank everyone for reading and your comments. |
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