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Dark Poetry #3

Maybe Jon, Maybe me

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

0 posted 2001-12-07 05:04 AM

so maybe we should puke
that's what  i remember  last
maybe i don't want this anymore
as  the brown (edited by a moderator)
tried

to kiss my ass
you stupid sense of nothing

haven't youu heard

i  guess not
because its not been said

call me i need some time
you should know i have  eyes  so  blind
yet my years, fears,  and pulling

live within a  time

autistic fear is rampant
discheveled twice

must i back up to  see
that being  alone has finally
damn  does  it  still  hurt

give me  one

i'd scream  too

until you  can
unless you don't
and  just think
we  might
care to fight
because what i think to be
just may  be

i love
can you ?

J.L. Koehler

[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 12-07-2001).]

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2002-01-13 02:20 AM

whoa..lots of raw emotion here...!

interesting write my friend..hope your anger subsides..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"in the darkness of my lonely room, i pray that you wont fade away too soon" -blue rodeo ;)

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-13 12:31 PM

This was full of anger and emotion...you really put ur feelings into this one!!! Great write!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2002-01-14 02:06 PM

great expression my friend. i love coming back and catching up on all of your work that i miss.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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