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Jessica
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0 posted 2001-12-05 09:00 PM



Crumbling tears fall from my eyes,
Granite to the touch,
As I think of all the things,
That made me care for you so much

Crashing thunder in my heart,
Bitter potions set me weak
Not holding back a single word
Your fore-told love is what I seek

Bodies embraced in the darkened night
Whispering secrets forever held within
Holding out for you, as far as I could go
Getting nothing in return but helpless sin

Please hush my mind's whirling screams
Give me the peace I deserve, what you owe
Hovering in my misery, alone I stand
To you my heart I will always bestow

Walking in the shadow of your "love",
Like a puppy left alone
A whimper escapes my silent lips,
Crying out these tears of stone.

This love shall burn eternal bright
Even though yours has given away
My emotions I can't control
You are the one, my only sun-lit day

© Copyright 2001 Jessica Langford - All Rights Reserved
Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 450
Alabama, USA
1 posted 2001-12-05 09:21 PM


I think we did rather well on this one Jess....it's still not as good as our first collab, but still decent.

*thwack* even if you did hog most of the writing :P

-Adam

"Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers

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