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I Think I Heard A Heart Break

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Marge Tindal
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I Think I Heard A Heart Break
~*Marge Tindal*~

I think I heard a heart break
heard the pieces as they fell
across a clatter of shatter
plummeting into hell~

Falling out of control
spiraling on their downward flight
I think I heard a heart break
on this very night~

I've not a reason for this rhyme
Someone's ink has jumped into my well
bringing thoughts of disastrous heartbreak
within my quilling to dwell~

I will write the emote
from a thought that was sent my way
and hope that you will find it
on the dawning of a new day~

May all the world look brighter
when the pieces of your heart mend
Know for now that I have heard
the breaking of your heart, my friend~

~*~

*Sending compassion to a heart-in-aching~
For though I don't know whose it is
I feel the need to send a hug
to the heart that I hear breaking~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 12-06-2001 09:02 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

In the darkest hours, there is incredible comfort in having someone listening to the whispers of their heart, knowing they are needed before knowing why, and reaching out in love and compassion. Your spirits told you truth... and I sit here amazed - by both the beauty of the poem and the beauty of the soul who penned it. Thank you, Marge... from the depths of a breaking heart.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 12-06-2001 09:09 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DearestSuthernGal~
I hold you in comfort of this friendship of knowing and caring~
God be with you and the family~

It's gonna be okay, gal ...
May you feel the power of His healing in your heart~

I send the biggest hugs you could ever imagine -
and enough prayerful thoughts to fill the Heavens~
I so want to comfort a friend ... you are my friend~
Bless you, sweetie~
Your dad is in my prayers as we speak~
Love .... much love~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Listening to every heart


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I rarely come in to Dark, and when I do, look at what I chance upon...something I needed...

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Marge, I am sure you will touch more than one breaking heart with this lovely poem.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Marge Tindal
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Karilea~
Thank you, sweetie ...
I just felt the need to touch a spirit I heard crying out~
Holding you in *hugs* too~

MisguidedAngel~
When the spirits whisper .. we are to be still and listen~
I try to do that ... and heard the heart of a friend~
Thank you, doll~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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Reminding myself ... that there are voices to be heard~
Sometimes ... my own~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Somewhere in time~


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Misty Lilacs
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THANK YOU!!!

To the world YOU may be one person, but to God, you are the world!

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9 posted 09-21-2006 09:28 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

It's amazing what is waiting here in these archives, if we only bother to look.

Today I find the perfect poem, for my rainy day.

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WOW great poem

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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ones heart seems to break as one cries
but only a release of pasts of shame
and evil ones lies
with a love and a touch of grace
i am back with god and with all my
power will do my best to wipe all evil
off this face and send it back to ones who
played god,

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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