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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2001-12-05 01:28 AM


You said
    you've never wanted someone so bad
so I gave myself to you.

You said
    nobody ever made you feel that good
and so you had to stop.

You said
    you never felt so close to anyone
and so you rolled over.

You said
    nobody has ever touched you the way I do
and so you pushed my hand away.

You said
    nobody has gazed into your eyes like I do
and so you looked away.

You said
    nobody ever made you feel such strong vibes
and so you left the room.

You said
    your feelings were starting to grow
and so you walked away.

You said
    you cared to much to hurt me
and now my heart is broken.

© Copyright 2001 Angie - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-12-05 02:53 AM


In recent experience I can tell you that people do not always know what they want...sometimes when they get what they think they want they realize they didn't really know what they wanted...confusing ain't I... James
Dark Poet
Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99
North Carolina, USA
2 posted 2001-12-05 04:14 AM


It might be confusing as said above but it is a truth of reality.  Sometimes we indeed do not know what we want and it can be rather annoying to build up to the moment and realize this sad tale.

Good cannot exist without evil.  Darkness I embrace.

alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).
3 posted 2001-12-05 12:38 PM


Hmmm, so many times ones actions speak louder than any words they could scream.
emotions wonderfully written.

Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

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