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Canuck Cat
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 4
Canada

0 posted 2001-12-04 02:10 AM



I see this man-
He wears a mask
fashioned by everyone else
he lives his life
and judges himself
by their unrealistic
standards

I see his dreams-
He slings them
careless, across the limb
to which he clings
desperate, silenced
by his southern
pride

I see this man-
nightly he casts
off the onerous facade
he lies naked, prone
covered only by
his tattered
ego

I hear his despair-
he sets forth
a great cathartic lament
for each gasping
breath, heaving sob,
I die a little
death

I reach across
a thousand miles
to caress away his tears
he suffers, bled of
his manliness, small
comfort I must
be

I love this man-
trodden by life
by the cruelty of others
I am humbled by
his depth of sadness
proud of his noble
strength

I see this man-
see him sway
so weary of his burdens
and I give my love
in hope it's enough
to heal this broken
man


© Copyright 2001 Cat Eckmier - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-12-04 02:26 PM


I could feel your anguish with every line. Enjoyed this tremendously. Welcome to our humble home. Please check your email for a special greeting.  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-12-04 03:31 PM


Excellent writing...James
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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3 posted 2001-12-04 03:49 PM


This is great!!   Welcome to DP!!   LOVE ELMO
lone_poet707
Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer
4 posted 2001-12-04 09:18 PM


Wow! The lines just ooze emotion! I haven't added much to my library, but this one I will for sure
  -Joe

alibaster
Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).
5 posted 2001-12-05 12:43 PM


All I can say is...
Simply Outstanding!!

Welcome, welcome, welcome...
to our world of darkness and despair...

Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

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