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Dark Poetry #3

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eve_winters
Junior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 12
Michigan

0 posted 2001-11-30 12:27 PM

The sun shines more often now that you're around
the clouds that have moved to the east have been replaced with optimism and clear skys
i don't embrace the thunder clap
or the lightening flash quite so much anymore
and the rain drops are tolerable...
but only when i'm in your arms

[This message has been edited by eve_winters (edited 11-30-2001).]

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-11-30 03:21 PM

i don't embrace the thunder clap
or the lightening flash

I like the sound of those lines.. hope to see more of your poems.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-12-08 02:32 PM

I loved this..*s

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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