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eve_winters
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 12
Michigan

0 posted 2001-11-30 01:21 AM


Every square inch of me screams a need to be with you
to gaze into your eyes and lose myself in your ocean of blue
the way my heart beats, flutters embraced by agony
morse code for i love you

mind racing with my body
my body racing with my mind
each trying to comprehend the feelings awakened inside
fingers tracing the air where your chest should be
running the length of your body with my eyes

just knowing you're there, feeling the lightening before it strikes, the day will come when i hold you and all my dreams will become reality

but for now, i walk alone day in and day out
shuffling my feet, souls of my shoes worn at an angle, morse code for i miss you...



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Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2001-11-30 01:48 AM


And to that, all I can say is thank you...
"A renewed hope that this day you will proclaim me victorious, with three simple words...And I remove my secret armor, and live in peace with you..." I love it, and I to the fullest extent needed that as a beacon to continually guide me on the path I fight even myself to veer from...

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2001-11-30 08:38 PM


Wow, the feeling I got from this is indescribable--I know this feeling all too well--Great images here!! Welcome to DP   I hope ya stay a while!!   LOVE ELMO
Daemonyin
Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31

3 posted 2001-11-30 11:51 PM


I was harpooned at the first verse of this beautiful, amazing poem.  You articulate your feelings well, and I hope to see more.
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2001-12-01 12:00 PM


Welcome to our family. I really enjoyed this poem especially the shoe morse code image! Please check your email!  
eve_winters
Junior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 12
Michigan
5 posted 2001-12-01 01:07 AM


wow, thank you all for making me feel so welcome here   almost expected my words to fall on deaf ears, i appreciate the comments and warmth!
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

6 posted 2001-12-01 11:46 AM


Sorry to hear your words to fall on deaf ears... but not really you know... in this wonderful world  

"souls of my shoes worn at an angle"... loved it!!!

Welcome    Take care.

~ Tara ~


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-12-01 01:25 PM


Yes the missing...hopefully it will be a time for love to grow and happiness will be yours...James
RevToiletDuck
New Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 1

8 posted 2001-12-05 10:48 PM


heh, she wrote it for me....jealous?

It really is beautiful..

eve_winters
Junior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 12
Michigan
9 posted 2001-12-07 01:48 AM


awww thanks revy   you're my muse ya know
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