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Tumbleweed
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since 2001-11-27
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0 posted 2001-11-27 11:41 PM



She walked towards us dressed in rags
with rain crawling into her tight-shut eyes
and sliding down her back.
Smells of tobacco smoke and electricity
clung wetly to her skin.

Her arms lift up to the ceiling
and she throws back her head to laugh.
It is a laugh which we do not understand
for she is half-naked.
She is hungry.
She has no family,
no home.

The laughter reaches arms around us,
Pulling us in and inviting us to listen.
This laughter;
this laughter which we barely recognize
as joy.

As we stand beside our cars
wrapped in our warm jackets
with wallets in our pockets filled
with pictures of our families;
we long to shed our clothes,
lift our arms up to the ceiling
and feel the rain streaming down our backs.

But we cannot bring ourselves
to abandon everything
and laugh.

As her laughter dies,
(the echoes live on)
she lowers her head
(we cannot escape her face).

Tight-shut eyes open wide to challenge the world.
Her eyes say, smiling;

"Go on, I dare you."
"I dare you to open yours."


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zarina
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since 2001-05-19
Posts 180

1 posted 2001-11-28 04:58 AM


WELCOME TO PIP    

I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you?

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-11-28 09:14 PM


A very good first post. Welcome
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2001-11-28 09:16 PM


Wow! Welcome to Passions, this is great!  
LOVE ELMO

Alysia182
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since 2001-06-22
Posts 19
CT
4 posted 2001-11-29 06:11 PM


This was a really good first post!  I loved it!  Keep up the good writing!

<3 Alysia <3

Some day, you will ache like I ache!  ~Hole

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-29 11:27 PM



Great First Post!!
   ~hugs, NancyLee~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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