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Sick of Crying
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Sick of Crying |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
I'm so sick of crying My heart can't take the pain You're driving me crazy And you don't even care What's with all this bull? You used to be so cool I though I saw forever, whenever I looked at you I know I've messeded up in the past But so have you Always ready to forgive and forget any wrong you'd do No matter how much you hurt me, I pushed the pain away I'd give anything to you As long as you were happy Even though you never seemed to care I was always there for you I'm sick of this twisted show My song and dance is becoming tiresome 'You don't care two cents about me boy' And I guess you never will I'm stuck in a place I don't wish to be in I can't clearly see if there's any way out Nothing in this world seems to bring me joy You were all I had You meant so much to me How I will go on living is a total mystery I don't know if I'm coming or going I don't even care any more When you left me I died inside, even though the pain stayed I am not truly alive All I can hope is that you're happy You killed a love that I never thought could die Blessed Be Those Who |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yes I felt just like this a few months ago, the pain & crying eventually stop & you start to feel like yourself again, trust me--It helps to keep very busy! These are some great expressions of a very painful time!  LOVE ELMO |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You killed a love that I never thought could die." I believe that love needs to be nourished...as I always say I want to be admired and desired...when this is lost in a relationship and replaced with criticism that is the point where love starts to die...because love wants to be desired and needed to florish and grow. Anything less is not really love...James |
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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
love is a waterfall...it's fast aced, furious, and at the end the drop is painful and unforgiving...however, it can be one of the most beautiful feelings in the entire world. i know what its like, to have love ripped apart by that special person...it really sux! just don't let it get ya down too long -Shep |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I would give you some really good advice that may actually change how you are feeling. But, the truth is when it was given to me I ignored it. I guess that is the good thing about advice, you don;t have to do it. But, rest your weary heart....what seems to have drained your heart, has also inspired you in a way that others only dream of. Love does HURT and no matter what people tell you, it will continue to for quite a while. You have a gift, so use it. I am a beleiver in faith, took me a very long time, and drug me through some really hard times. But, one day I found the love of my life....and so shall you. Remember....what does not kill us, shall make us stronger! Timothys Angel |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
Some no matter how much you love cannot tear down their wall that would allow them to care. Some just don't care and that is sad because they have someone that will cherish them and throw it away. Look forward to reading more of your writing. Moonlight, James Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace. |
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