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Born Of Hope
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Born Of Hope |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Born Of Hope Born of hope Raised in pain I live this life Cloaked in shame Dare I continue To follow this plight To seek the freedom And remove this blight To carry on And bear the weight Seems that I must For it is my fate "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi EagleOne, I like this one ...  You have just wrote my thoughts ... ... ~verve |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Your fate, although anguished, builds wisdom and gives you the "power of love", and your hope is your secret armor. For just a whisper in the air is heard by one somewhere... you see, your life was meant to be... Keep treading your thorn laiden path. It is yours to tread, and the destination for you is, and will be worth it all, now and forever. Thanks for sharing! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Verve ~ So many times I have seen others write my thoughts, a sad feeling for me. Glad you enjoyed, take care! Purity ~ Thanks for reading, and for the response. It almost gives one hope enough to keep going, you take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How I relate to this, and fate I am still trying to figure out that word! Good to be in the dark for a few, my eyes were blurred  Kathleen (Kay) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Kathleen ~ I've given up trying to figure it out. I don't know if it's all that good to be in the dark too often, but there is enlightenment to be found there on occasions. Take care my friend! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
EagleOne, we all at sometime feel that we have to struggle, I hope these feelings don't last too long for you. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Oh, how I understand. The only hope is that the light has to be some place and may it come soon. It has alot more meaning after the darkness. You can make it!!! ME |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Short and to the point. To carry on And bear the weight Seems that I must For it is my fate Yes, there are always burdens in our lives. I hope yours feel lighter soon If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Andrea ~ the ebb and flow is always there, but I think the intensity changes along the way. Thanks, take care! M E ~ As I grow wiser I appreciate my time in the sun just that little bit more, thank you! Tracey ~ So do I Tracey, so do I, thanks. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is great! I used to believe in fate so strongly but that belief is starting to fade fast!  LOVE ELMO |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
yes! But it that a good or bad thing? A matter of perspective I think, thanks for stopping by!"Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Hmmmm but how do we REALLY know our own fate? Loved this one, you write so beautiful Mags Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Fate and destiny! Mmmm what to say about them, I agree I think, as it is not generally until we look back that we can recognise it! Glad you enjoyed my friend, can't say as I agree with your thoughts on my writing though , take care! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Keeping on-- the adversity will make you stronger and make the destination even sweeter to reach. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Jamie, at the end of the day I guess there's not really much choice but to keep going is there! Thanks. It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"to carry on and bear the weight..." we all have our burdens...they'll make us stronger if we let them.. fate? i believe we all have a 'plan' made for us..some way or another, we end up living it..it just is...  always enjoy reading you friend eagle..! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Nicely written..i've felt this way before as well.. yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thanks for stopping by friends! I always appreciate your thoughts, take care! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is beautiful, Eagle... such powerful words, but so very few in its intensity. I loved it. Fate sucks sometimes, eh? *sigh* Very well done, indeed! --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Fading Away ~ Yeah! Sometimes fate sucks, thank you! |
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