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carolinadreams
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0 posted 2001-11-24 12:45 PM



feelings, oh the feelings
weren't they so
living this life and loving the strife
at least feelings
so many the chore
so many the whore
but feelings
distress a young goddess
with our feelings
oh yes our feelings
we say yes or no
and don't even know
the feelings
we change lites obscure
and still we have her
feelings
care to chance
within circumstance
her feelings
feelings
dance into her twine
feel our time
feelings
change once too often
explain the mountain
display love for all
stain a dance with all
but feelings

J.L. Koehler


© Copyright 2001 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-11-24 11:02 AM


and then. . .

well. . . it's all here. . .

well done. . .

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2001-12-07 11:12 PM


CarolinaDreams I think you explained this very well.  It is simply beautiful - thankyou.....

Isis

*~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~*

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