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Goodbye |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Goodbye Stood on the porch where we so often sat, together. Whispered your name… the wind took it away, lofted it high, carried it across the yard, the trees, and I thought I heard a fading goodbye… Sat in your rocker, could still feel your warmth, the touch of your skin, the love in your heart, the way you touched my hand; said your name aloud… the wind wisked it off the porch, and I thought I heard a hurried goodbye. Walked inside, room to room, out again, placed my hands on the back of your chair, screamed your name… the wind stopped and I heard a soft goodbye, goodbye… w.james beard, jr. (c)november 2001 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and the letting go begins. . . *sigh* it's always hardest this way. . . but, you find the way. . . well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
in the same boat my friend. i had to let my girlfriend go after 6 months cause i could not put up with her drug problem. great poem by the way and also if you ever need anything just email me i'm here. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sven - the time does come, doesn't it. JJ - Thanks, me friend...never know when I might need that offer - for now though - this isn't about me. jimmy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, you do a great poem about loss, especially if it's not about you! Very powerful write. Sandra |
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