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Jessica
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0 posted 2001-11-23 01:15 AM


An angel's tear drop
Felt deep within
Falling in complete silence
Not portraying her sin

An angel's sweet touch
Upon your skin
Caressing your thoughts
Feeling helpless again

An angel's innocent stare
Pulling you farther in
Hiding her empty faith
Letting you win

An angel's gentle words
Filling your ears with lust & sin
Slicing her way through your heart
Forcing the weak to condescend


7:21 PM 11/22/01

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Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 450
Alabama, USA
1 posted 2001-11-23 01:18 AM


You know I like this one, but I guess I'll just have to say it again. It rocks, though it's not your best.

-Adam  

"Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2001-11-23 01:03 PM


this is a great piece. i love how you show the sin of an angel. keep it up

  ---The Devil is an angel too---
                Can't remember who said it

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2001-11-23 02:50 PM


Enjoyed the read my friend.

jwesley

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