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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
wishing i was dead not wanting to be alive feeling totally numb hoping to stop the pain the pain is so real it hurts no one seems to care why would they feeling like i'm all alone yet surrounded by many no one can take away this feeling of lonelyness it just sits and rots knowing living is worst then death yet here i am today as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
This is well written. I liked it. I know what this kind of pain is like, just remember you're always loved here. JT |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You conveyed the emptiness well. Take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have written the feelings well...James |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i understand all to well. reminds me of a tom petty song. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
You describe it well. Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Think we've all been there and believe it or not, we all found out things do go on and love comes again...over and over as often as is necessary. At the same time, we NEVER forget the past. Memories, you know. jwesley |
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