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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
Maybe someone can help name this poem? I don't even know what it means or why i wrote it.... *************************************************** Untitled My mind wanders to that day When, I wish, I had the courage to say Damn you Damn you and all your nasty ways As hours turn into days I wish it didn't have to be that way You know how you were And you know what you can be I'm not that stupid nor young So please dont play with me I know what you don't I see what you won't You never offered an I love you You never showed you cared I can't stand you when you're near me Please just stop trying to be there You say that i don't treat you fair You say that I don't care But what the hell do you know When you were never there? I loved you from the very start And I love you with all my heart But we never, at the same time, love each other Babe, because of that we must depart Love Always, |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
I really liked that poem!!! As always, it was a beautiful poem that made me shed tears onto my keyboard!What a mess! I have a name for your poem if interested? Why not call it"Heartbroken Lover"?Well done!!Why did you choose the name PoetOfDarknesss2002? |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
Heartbroken Lover sounds good and it fits...And i picked the name PoetOfDarkness2002 because not one poem that i have written nor do i think i will write, is happy...They are all sad and painfilled...so to me poetofdarkness fits me, and the 2002 is just the year...Thank you for reading and responding...Keep shining! Love Always, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how about "Not meant to be" good poem, poetofdarkness |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hm... I would say call it something to do with one sidedness. If you're into math you could call it "The Mobius Strip of Love"  "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
Thanks Guys...Keep shining! Love Always, |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
beautiful, Manda. i don't see a need to title every poem, and of course for some of my favorite stuff, i don't know what it means or why i wrote it. |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
hehe thanks you...i honestly didnt even remember writing this one....lol..i write so many...tanks you again.. ~*manda*~ |
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StephyBob07 Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37Texas |
wow, this poem wuz awesome! it had so much feeling for u to not know why you wrote it. lol. hey i do that sometimes too, just let the pen do the work for you. lol. great job! ~stephy "...and poets are born knowing the language of angels." -Madeline L'Engle |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
"Bloodshed" *wink* xxoo |
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