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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
i've lost alot of time because of you i came here so i need not be you censor me again indulge in time what do i tweak can you vent what do i care i'm just here censor me again you trite peice of nothing find within enough power to stay again will you cower when explatives are spoken and will you try because of drugs man made and forced upon me I think not care to challenge censor me again, it has done England well censor me again, and mark us you just cannot hang poets and live care to apologise J.L. Koehler Dedicated to small minded idiots |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You convey some powerful emotions here! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
I feel your pain Great poem |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Blessed be the hypocrite for not masking his other identity, eh? Met a few of whom, you speak, and my hypocricy is not taking the advice I have relative to 'em, and that's to have nothing to do with them whatsoever... Great writing! Awesome use of caesura... and love the denoument... I know him well. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
wonderful piece my friend. you keep getting better and better. so i'll have to keep reading them all. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
I can only say that I love your replies, and that we all will write a VERY important book. Someone said "Give us time and we shall write". Okay so I said it, but is it not that easy ? |
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