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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-15 06:26 PM

Thunder lighting flash across the realm,
Animals mourning under the moon,
Helpless cried fills the night within.
As though angels are crying,
Water pouring from the sky,
Tears running down statues,
The world is yearning for hope.
And as I look upon the sky,
One fierce monster gaves me a stare.
It sounds like thunder, moves like storms.
Its shape is like a fat guy with pig nose,
crow eyes and crow horns stuck in its face.
Maybe I am hypnotized,
I see an ocean of waves inside its eyes,
sucking me into sea of endless.
Then I see a star with a bright white light,
My body couldn't move but my heart is pounding.
Maybe that is my last hope,
Or am I in heaven?

Lizzy Vivian http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~A little sour add to taste of life.
~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordina

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-15 10:34 PM

"Water pouring from the sky,
Tears running down statues,
The world is yearning for hope."

I like the visuals I get from this

good job!

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2001-11-21 01:17 AM

i love the image you create here. i love to learn about greek gods. well all gods really if thats what the hades means like the image of hell or heaven.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-11-21 02:59 AM

Well....excellent comes to mind when I read this poem.

Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2001-11-21 12:58 PM

thanks. This one was draft and first put on my site in 1999 then I think it's in this year that I find it too short or not good enough and add the last part to it. I'm glad it has improved to be better.

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

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