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Danielle
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0 posted 2001-11-11 08:11 PM


As the days go by I wonder
Will things ever be easy?
Will life ever be simple?
Why does the pain always stay so long?
It hurts so much
Everyday is a struggle to survive
Suicide is always on my mind
Am I strong enough to go on?
Or will I take the easy way out?
This world is full of heart ache and pain
No one wishes to live like this
My life will never be the way it should
Things will only get harder as the years progress
The road I'm on will get me no where
I need to find myself a new path, so easily lead astray, I must find my way

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

© Copyright 2001 Danielle Lefebvre - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
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1 posted 2001-11-11 08:40 PM


I enjoyed reading this, although it is very sad, but trust me it does get better eventually--It can't get much worse, right? Just remember no matter how bad you have it at some point somebody, somewhere else has it much worse! Great work here!   LOVE ELMO
aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2001-11-11 10:16 PM


Life is like a little song we hum.
As the melody is low we sigh
But notes never stays the same throughout a song;
Just as the tides pulled from the moon.
So don't be so upset when you hear alto
Cause you will be up in the tide before you know it.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
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~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

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3 posted 2001-11-13 01:57 PM


i really enjoyed this poem. I've felt like u've felt for most of my life and believe me i kno how it feels to want to take the easy way out and not knowing if your gonna be strong enough to live to see the next day...you expressed yourself nicely...good job

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Dark Poet
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since 2001-07-22
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4 posted 2001-11-14 05:15 AM


That it is.....I find myself with such thoughts at times.

Good cannot exist without evil.  Darkness I embrace.

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