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0 posted 2001-11-09 10:20 AM


I thought i meant something,
For 9 months of my life.
I felt needed and wanted,
And that i was a necessity in your life.
I dont know where my power went,
I dont know what i did wrong.
All of a sudden i fell of my pedistal,
And i dont feel so strong.
Im seeing you eye to eye,
Im not propped up on a cloud.
You tell me how you'll never be happy,
Not even with me around.
I use to make you better,
I use to do miraculous things.
Now i seem to be like everyone else,
Im once again plain old me.
Tears stream down my face,
Im so helpless now.
I want to be good for you like I use to,
And i dont know how.
Theres no more to say i guess,
You've made your decision its quite clear.
It doesnt really matter to you,
Wether im far away or near.
You'll never get better you say,
You just want to be alone.
I guess all i can do now,
Is walk you home.

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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1 posted 2001-11-09 11:21 AM


A sad tale....

We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone.  It is what we do between those times that matters.  This is where we leave our mark.

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2 posted 2001-11-13 10:15 AM


thanks dark

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-11-14 04:45 PM


Strong message that it takes two...James
Jeremiah Johnson
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4 posted 2001-11-21 01:10 AM


a wonderful poem. i think i'm gonna have to catch up on your other work. keep up the good work

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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5 posted 2001-11-26 07:36 PM


Yes I have felt this B4--great expressions here!--You will find yourself again & put the pieces back together!   LOVE ELMO
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