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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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When the information was being acquired, It just started my foolish fancy. I was determined not to hear my friends To the extending to discover you. My curiosity, my straightforwardness I did not think so Too much attention for you. When all the patience was over, And all love was slipped away, I could only said to myself at last That it was all but a dream. It started in my fancy, ended where it belonged, And buried with my pain. I did not cry so much for his love, But was stress by the lost of his friendship. When I found out who he was, I could hardly contain myself. What a scene it must have been, When I threw myself to him. Was it not so obvious That he cared a sixpence of me. Love, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I did not cry so much for his love, But was stress by the lost of his friendship. When I found out who he was, I could hardly contain myself. What a scene it must have been, When I threw myself to him." that part is amazing. I really liked this  |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Powerful piece.... I was moved by your words. I look forward to reading more of your work. Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Thanks. I hope my works will keep improving. You can check out my poetry site if you wish. Though my poems are not very good. Love, |
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