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In the gloom of my pain
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In the gloom of my pain |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Happiness is a fantasy And smiles got unnatural Each day a bother walk And every night a torture Self-respect has gone And ego fall down somewhere A killing sore Bleeding with no mercy In this wretched soul A deep wound Exposing my vulnerability In an agony living You did it all so brilliantly Without a movement or a word Never loosing your way Just being the perfect you are Doing it all as an angel And as a queen would do No allegations at all And nothing to claim for My entire fault So this verdict I deserve Fated to live hidden In the gloom of my pain |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, this is excellent.  |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
'Fated to live hidden in the gloom of my pain..." that says it all... Excellent poem! Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul. |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Thank you so much, SEA and BARONI, for your nice words. |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
Absolutely Awesome!!! We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone. It is what we do between those times that matters. This is where we leave our mark. |
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